wow! I can't wait! I have yet to read The Midnight Dancers but I'm hoping to get both of those by the end of the year. I may have to give them as Christmas gifts to siblings if I want the then in the house soon though.
Might I make a suggestion? Having "cyberthieves" down below forty is unsymmetrical and distracting to the eye. If you minimized the "forty" and had "forty cyberthieves" on the same line, it would look so much better.
You seem to be putting proper emphasis on each bit, but I really would like to see those two words right after each other. It's very bothering.
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Might I make a suggestion? Having "cyberthieves" down below forty is unsymmetrical and distracting to the eye. If you minimized the "forty" and had "forty cyberthieves" on the same line, it would look so much better.
You seem to be putting proper emphasis on each bit, but I really would like to see those two words right after each other. It's very bothering.